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January 28, 2012

why…

just why ?

why didn’t you try..

it would never have been so wry…

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choices were made without any compulsions…

then why cast all the delusions…

raising false expectations…

and dashing all emotions…

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but life must move on…

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no one but oneself to blame…

pointing fingers is so lame…

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pay up you must…

make up you must…

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that’s all that you can do…

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20 Comments leave one →
  1. January 28, 2012 10:34 am

    If this is about cricket then very well said…….

    • January 28, 2012 10:35 am

      your sense of humour has seriously picked up a notch :)

      • January 28, 2012 10:43 am

        I can make out how much upset you are about Indian team loosing the series ……

  2. January 28, 2012 11:11 am

    Ate something that you shpuldn’t have and have an upset tummy now??? :D :D :D

  3. January 28, 2012 4:54 pm

    Nice rhyme :) If it’s something real, well, I offer you a wry smile, and say… “Because” :)
    I did like it. Something quite poignantly unfinished about it!

  4. January 29, 2012 12:17 am

    Well my initial thoughts were exactly what Saritha mentioned…but if it is something else, I must say…take care…hope all gets back on the track real soon
    Enjoyed the rhymes :)

    • January 29, 2012 9:27 am

      nothing to do with me… ! just a few things happening around me… !

  5. January 29, 2012 9:22 am

    I find it a bit surprising that a person who has a tagline ‘My attempt to write – about anything and everything I see and feel’ has so much of pathos underneath.
    I do agree that there is nothing inherently wrong having a feeling – any type of feeling for that matter – about what one sees [or does not see] around. It does make a good proposition to capture that feeling and be able to communicate.
    So long as pathos does not bring in the permanent feeling of depression

    • January 29, 2012 9:26 am

      Welcome to the blog Ashok ! You still have not read me enough !

      depression and me ! :P ha ha

  6. January 29, 2012 10:34 am

    Since it’s not about cricket, take care. And nothing like reminding yourself that you can after this harsh self analysis. So let me add,
    //pay up you must…

    make up you must…

    ~

    that’s all that you can do…
    AND YOU CAN. And so you will. ASAP. //

  7. January 30, 2012 9:39 am

    So you are telling us this is NOT about cricket eh? Shu bhai….RD and you can form a mutual depressed bugged of Indian cricket club or something :)

    • January 30, 2012 9:43 am

      see its not about cricket… and please Bhai mat kaho na ! :mad:

  8. February 15, 2012 10:39 am

    See how cricket ‘fanatics’ are judged :-)

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