55 word fiction

Saw this being done by Solilo first… kinda like it…. thought i should give it a try, this is an amateur attempt… so bear with it !

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“ Hey your stance !!”
“Why, whats wrong ?”
“You’re standing outside legstump.”
“really??”
“Are you scared of pace??”
“no !!! ”
“You sissy, you scared of his pace, be a man, come behind the line.”

“You’re wearing the only abdominal guard we have Brave ass, if I come behind the line, I may not remain a man !!”

[ p.s. I dont know if it qualifies, I dont know if it has a morale… I take time to learn, but whats the harm in trying ] 😉
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A literary work will be considered 55 Fiction if it has:

Fifty-five words or less (A non-negotiable rule)
A setting,
One or more characters,
Some conflict, and

A resolution. (Not limited to moral of the story)

Read more about 55 fiction origin and criteria

Anyone interested can take up this tag.

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25 thoughts on “55 word fiction

  1. Badz says:

    Wow Dear! You’re getting good at writing these kind of things. I’ll will attempt to take the “55 words” challenge later and either email it you or put in your comments. 😉

  2. Solilo says:

    Dhiren, Yahaan bhi Cricket. You are now our unofficial Sachin. Where is Sehwag-Chirax?

    “I may not remain a man”. Ha..ha..ha..the funniest 55-er.

  3. hitch writer says:

    BADZ : its high time you start a blog !

    MASOOD : I m sure yours will be an emotional one. !

    VARUNAVI & SANDHYA : Thanks !

    AJIT : this is a true story !

    VINODJI : Now you have qualified my story ! lol…

    USHA : 🙂

    MAYZ & INDYEAH : Now that is making my swell…. ! 😀

  4. hitch writer says:

    SOLILO : naheeee…. me not sachin…. me veeru… chirax is sachin…. Me veeru lover !!! totally !!!

    RENU : Cricket fever was here even before IPL was born… and it will remain always !! 🙂

  5. Badz says:

    LoL! You’re right I should BUT I don’t think many people would read it. And the people that did, would eventually get bored of me. 😉

  6. Indian Home Maker says:

    LOL this is 55 words of humour with a moral 🙂

    We did switch off our lights for Earth Hour… and I managed to attempt a 55 words fiction on that – my first one 🙂

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