~ when rage fills you up ~
the vision becomes all murky,
inane things also seem catastrophical..
bereft of even poetry and sense,
clenching teeth… and heavy breaths…
like a ocean’s tempest..
the world’s in a swirl,
and no calm in sight..
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Pithy. Terse. And filled with… rage 🙂
You’re getting to be a poet too! Wonderful!
Your header is awesome. And am I FTC (got that from Shail :D)???
Over at Yahoo 360, there used to be a rush to be the first to comment. Writing it out might push you off the slot, so people wrote, “First to comment” posted that and only afterwards wrote out the real comment. Even that required time and might make you second, so was shortened to FTC! 😉 I just remembered those days (2006/2007) before Shail’s Nest happened. 🙂
FTC ?
First to comment 😀
When the tsunami
surrounds you,
ensure
it doesn’t get inside you.
Be like the fish
quietly
biding its time
waiting
in
the deepest recesses
of the ocean.
Let the waves
dash in anger,
and splash across
and they will
flow out
carrying the debris
from the mind.
oh oh!!! why so much rage?
you have written it beauitfully though! 🙂
Hitchy, wah. Well expressed.
Why this why this Kolaveri Hitchy? 😦 Who are you going to murder? 😐
Yeah… you have just commented what I wanted to comment. Completely agree… why whatever is happening hitchy 😐 Gee…..
It’s supposed to be festive season n all !! What’s going on?!
I know..I was going to ask the same thing..over dose of Kolaveri is it 🙂
and the man has the guts not to answer the chicks who visit his blog religiously 😡 👿 😈
Baap,re who are you raging at, Hitchy! Whoever it is deserves a pat in the back for he brought out this impressive poetic side of you :)! Beauftifully expressed!
I like the attitude … the rage translated into poetry so well and good! 😀